runtime/metrics: improve doc

Polish a sentence by removing redundant "in response".

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diff --git a/src/runtime/metrics/description.go b/src/runtime/metrics/description.go
index c8c5bf98881a779e53ce88acbc70f04bcfaa7103..b9a6ab5fea6083ac9720d10d81157e244f9adb15 100644 (file)
--- a/src/runtime/metrics/description.go
+++ b/src/runtime/metrics/description.go
@@ -126,7 +126,7 @@ var allDesc = []Description{
        {
                Name: "/cpu/classes/scavenge/assist:cpu-seconds",
                Description: "Estimated total CPU time spent returning unused memory to the " +
-                       "underlying platform in response eagerly in response to memory pressure. " +
+                       "underlying platform in response eagerly to memory pressure. " +
                        "This metric is an overestimate, and not directly comparable to " +
                        "system CPU time measurements. Compare only with other /cpu/classes " +
                        "metrics.",

diff --git a/src/runtime/metrics/doc.go b/src/runtime/metrics/doc.go
index 00ce60dde1a7f5212e2da10b67b671ad3969aa31..e40ce25ff9d1bc301355a5b23f4cdfb046c6607b 100644 (file)
--- a/src/runtime/metrics/doc.go
+++ b/src/runtime/metrics/doc.go
@@ -104,10 +104,10 @@ Below is the full list of supported metrics, ordered lexicographically.
 
        /cpu/classes/scavenge/assist:cpu-seconds
                Estimated total CPU time spent returning unused memory to the
-               underlying platform in response eagerly in response to memory
-               pressure. This metric is an overestimate, and not directly
-               comparable to system CPU time measurements. Compare only with
-               other /cpu/classes metrics.
+               underlying platform in response eagerly to memory pressure. This
+               metric is an overestimate, and not directly comparable to system
+               CPU time measurements. Compare only with other /cpu/classes
+               metrics.
 
        /cpu/classes/scavenge/background:cpu-seconds
                Estimated total CPU time spent performing background tasks to